Writing is a great form its just a bunch of symbols cramped into lines and a form of communication its also a factor for tales and books speeches and I'm here to show you my writing and for which my writing is a persuasive speech and I finished it and I have gotten feed back on what I could edit and make better and here is the comment I got on my speech:
And this is what it looked like:
And then this is how I changed it:
I changed it by about 2 sentences which does now seem fixed which I am glad to say and I did get some positive feed back and I appreciated that a lot my speech name is happiness is kind of a choice and think this is true.
How would you explain what writing is?
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